tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11840313.post1066556225701686199..comments2024-03-10T10:54:59.776-07:00Comments on Ben Witherington: THE LAZARUS EFFECT-- PART ELEVENBen Witheringtonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06017701050859255865noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11840313.post-37661397564415910332007-05-07T06:16:00.000-07:002007-05-07T06:16:00.000-07:00Hi,it seems the chapter numbering went off somewhe...Hi,<BR/><BR/>it seems the chapter numbering went off somewhere. Part Five ended with Ch. 12, and Part Six started with Ch. 14 ...<BR/><BR/>Or do we actually miss a chapter in there?<BR/><BR/>Regards,<BR/><BR/>Wolf Paulwnpaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18231515296470375310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11840313.post-21411774443756494782007-05-05T10:57:00.000-07:002007-05-05T10:57:00.000-07:00When set up with a page size and font size that ap...When set up with a page size and font size that approximates a hardcover book, this novel seems a bit short, but that would be remedied by my other concern ... I think some portions of the story need to be fleshed out somewhat. For example, reference is made to the James ossuary ... I wonder how widespread knowledge of this is? There were other areas which could have been fleshed out ... characters that could have been further developed. <BR/><BR/>The ending left something to be desired. One of the elements of a good book for me is that I am left wanting more at the end of the book. I definitely wanted more, but was still disappointed with the end. <BR/><BR/>The other points are minor and a good editor would find them ... a few misspelled words, the used of Discover instead of Discovery Channel (if you aren't going to call it Discovery, call it something completely different so I don't think it's an error).<BR/><BR/>Overall, I liked it and would love to see what it would be like if you implemented some of the above suggestions.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01654647648701946603noreply@blogger.com